I need to improve on looking at the audience more. I also need to improve on being more enthusiastic. My voice was strong enough, but I slouched a bit, and it's hard to tell if I am confident or not. I was a little nervous, and i forgot to add some of the points on my outline, like birthdate, and what I plan to purue later. After the first item, I relaxed more and was able to improve on my speech and save my grade.